First time writing poetry

This is my first time so it might be lame. You can tell me your feedback without any problem you can be honest and we learn from our mistakes. You may contact me through email my address is Konjetivenkataanjali@gmail.com if you have questions also you can contact. I will reply but I might not be able to do it immediately. you could also give me suggestions.

At first I was not interested in poetry until once my teacher shared this poem;

Longer than there have been fishes in the ocean, Higher than any bird ever flew, Longer than there have been stars up in heaven,

Stronger than Mountain Cathedral, Truer than any tree ever grew, Deeper than any forest primeval,

I will be with you,

Through the years on the fire starts to mellow, Burning lines in the book of our lives, Through the binding cracks and the pages start to yellow,

I will be in love with you…

I’ll bring fire in the winters you’ll send showers in the spring, n We will fly through the falls in summer with love on our wings…

please share your thoughts. You could start with simple topics like I started by writing a poem about how I feel about the nature interacting with me, like the wind is blowing at my face, the sun hiding behind the hills and the rain drops hitting on my skin like spikes. My teacher told me a trick writing poems you have to catch The Eye of the reader and normally ‘most’ of the people prefer short poems so you could write it short and simple like, I want to be many things – a giant cloud, infinite balloons-. I just wrote one line which came into my mind I will write my poem in the next thing I post because I have to make some changes. Don’t forget to send me your feedback thank you for seeing my website. Bye

7 thoughts on “First time writing poetry

  1. Anjali it’s a nice poem with simple language and with emotional touch. It has deeper meaning which can relate to human relations.

    I liked it and would like to see more comming from you

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  2. Adorable…with your small hands and cute little brain…I wonder how better you can be in the next lines..god bless you

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  3. Very nice poem Anjali, you have inspired by nature and then you expressed you feelings in the poem. Over all I liked your poem, keep trying and posting.
    Well done ! Keep rocking.

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